I am not a fan of guns. In fact, I hate them and I am scared of them. I have been known to hastily cross the street when I see someone with a gun on their hip.-Lihle Z Mtshali
How can we let these deadly things corrupt us? They will cause humanity to kill each other,and we can't let them take away our children.First of all I think its ridiculous A gun is a large amount of metal made to fire at a human's command. We cant say that we are made to do any thing by a gun. We may as well say that our cell phone is making us send a text. Humans do these things out of our free will. We make the choice as to weather or not it is fired, not the gun itself. Secondly gunpowder was made to treat skin infections in china in the early 13th century(http://science.howstuffworks.com/innovation/inventions/who-invented-the-first-gun.htm) We are the ones that took something made for medicine and turned it into a deadly weapon. By killing someone you are making everyone in that family suffer. That man or woman may have little children. who are you to say that they cant grow up knowing their parent?People of Guncite.com said it perfectly when talking about the second amendment "Although the amendment emphasizes the need for a militia, membership in any militia, let alone a well-regulated one, was not intended to serve as a prerequisite for exercising the right to keep arms." this basically means that people were are legally allowed to own these weapons but not in order to use them on each other.
In order to take care of all of the problem we need stricter gun laws. The thing that we used as a weapon against an animal has become a weapon against ourselves.humans do make the choice, but we need to be a lot more strict about who we give a gun to. We are only hurting ourselves by not having these laws in place, because from revenge breeds revenge. the person who you hurt will have people that care about him or her that will want to come after you.
William,
ReplyDeleteGreat videos. I love the VT debate video, very human.
But your blog seems to lack the organization that I'm looking for.
You need to include, in the second paragraph, the opposing viewpoint. What are pro-gun folks saying about the amendment? What are pro-gun leaders saying about gun rights? What are some statistics that they use to make their case?
You've included some facts, but try to put 3 or more in each paragraph.
Also, please do not cut and paste text. The fonts in the body and the background colors should be uniform in order to look professional.
Please take the time to organize your blog before you start writing. Be sure to emphasize, clearly, the opposing viewpoint, so that your reader can see both sides of the argument. Then you convince them that you are right.
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